SvenDay's Reviews

[Merry Christmas 2014]

Its ten seconds long, and skips to nine seconds after two seconds passed. No audio, and it doesn't have any movement in the video. I refreshed, and still no change. I suggest checking it out.

FaveyOfficial responds:

Thanks for letting me know... I dunno WTF happened to the whole animation. The only thing you can see is like 1/2 seconds of the intro... :(

[Making a scene]

Very informant of how to do frame, by frame animations. I ask that you do more of this. It may help out a new, or inspiring animator.

HMarioProductionsH responds:

I will try to make more friends, I'm glad you think so, thanks

[When Guard Isn't Pizzeria]

It is way to short. Seriously you could only do a 15 second long video? There is so much potenial in this, and you have literally just shat on it. Where are the other three characters? Why are the lights not part of this? You could have one of them show up when the door is open, for something like a bell, or a chime. Seriously there is nothing fancy, or awesome about a teaser this poorly done. Take it back to your program, and add more to this. Till them. You have my ban vote.

SuperWiiBros08 responds:

Well I could made a long 1 minutes remix Where at some point I would get boring of it and maybe just stop doing it, I didn't had any other idea of what to put, I only think on recreating "that video" and that was it, I tough for a moment, maybe showing Mike's reaction.
I know is way to short, but If you look at my other long animations...to be honest I didn't gave them a good effort, I actually forced myself to finish them...So I thought it would be better to do something short, and I didn't forced myself this time!
I appreciate your critical dude, I see you know that I have "good animations skills".

[Go-Go-Go]

Pretty good. Just need music, and maybe work a little on the hit boxes for the characters. Might add some new things as they get further in distance to add to difficulty. True it is a robot unicorn attack style game, but the added feature of the shurikan throw can make the game a little better. Keep evolving it with more features, and it might go pretty far.

DurzanTwo responds:

Thanks, I'm already working on updates, I intend to put more characters ... a specific enemy for each scenario, and specific music for each scenario too ... thanks for the tips. =)

[Aunt's House]

It is not much of a demo, but more of a shameful plug to get Patreon donations. The art was pretty much a normal style dirty comic. Nothing special. The games where sub-par. Even for NG. This was kinda bottom of the bucket here.

[Naruto:The Demo]

Slight lag in running. It takes half the screen to initiate run. Might want to instead switch it to double tap A/D Left/Right Make it to where you can dead sprint. It would make the fight seem a little more actiony. i would also suggest the dodge function. It would be block+move (if that suggestion would work) also for specials. I would say why not have Naruto's specials go like this. (One bar: Single shadow clone. Twobar: Multi-shadow clone, three bar: Sage mode, Full bar: Rasengan) As for Susuke. (One bar: Fire ball, Two bar: Summon, and throw Giant shurikan, Three bar: Sharingen, Full bar: Chidori)

Just some suggestions. Hope it helps.

sjt responds:

Thanks yeah I'm switching to double tap pretty soon.

[Wind Waker - Laruto's Lament]

Where is the bloody repeat button! I want to sleep to this. The melody is accurate, though the lyrics I cannot say are. I will say that even if it is not accurate you did splendidly. I am now following you, and your wonderful music.

VGSongbird responds:

I didn't take Latin scholastically. What I know of it I tried to research on my own, and picked up from my 4 or 5 years in choral programs--so I'm sure it's not perfect.
But thank you for rating it so high anyways! I'm glad you at least enjoyed the sounds.

[[SN] Dark Irish]

You did a pretty good mix of techno/ravish music with a classical forebear. I can really listen to this over, and over. I look forward into seeing some more from you later on.

SpyzViridian responds:

Thanks for the review again! ^_^

I'm glad you like it, I'll upload more songs like this!

[Requiem for a Star]

Lovely composure. I think if the strings had just a slight more echo it could improve of this piece. I am going to check out more of your works.

SpyzViridian responds:

Thanks for the review! I'll see if I can improve the song with more echo or making it a little longer.

[a very angry chib]

Looks like you did some layer adjustment, and didn't get to a few spots. They are very hard to see if you are not looking for messups, but all in all the art is pretty good. A few things i have found that is wrong in this, and you may argue some of them.

The left ear. (The one on the right side of the picture) has a sharper bottom incline/decline junction point. Possible touch up, but not a major issue.

Layering white spots. Along the bottom near the little heart, and some spots along the hair points at teh bottom of the picture. You can see a very small line of white. This could be a layering error, but I don't see much wrong in it.

I hope my words don't offend you, and may help you in your art.

Saintanist responds:

Don't like my criticism then don't post shit. I gave you a good rating, and gave you feedback. If you act like that you won't be on here long, and have a following. Unless you try to post mature content, but that would mean you have nothing better to do with your life then to draw naked women. All I did was give you legit feedback over some things I noticed in your picture, and you throw a hissy fit about it. I don't really care for the grade school bs so I am going to end my argument here with this. You can ignore it, and let it go, or you can respond with a little less hostility.